Sep 18,2024.

 Today we had to work with a partner to view our essay. Me and my partner were exchanged our papers where we wrote our feedback. If there was comments or changes that the partner gave us then we will do the changes in our essay. I liked how my printer helped me with my spelling grammar. I also really liked her essay it was more simpler and clear. This was a good opportunity before I submitted it for a nice grade. It can help my mood up with my partner help me improve my essay.

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